Teachers feedback

We got some feedback of our film so far and what could be changed or improved. A comment made was at the end of the film instead of her being in a room crying that we actually film her in the room having to carry on everyday an what she does. We needed some more action as our film gives off the impression something upbeat is about to happen so maybe a fight or dispute between the attacker is needed to be bring up the tension. Also music, some upbeat drums to add tension which we can find on the music of iMovie or we coulda make on garage band.